Discussion in 'Large Art' started by Roma, Mar 2, 2010.
It' s not very good I think, but i really don' t know what else i can improve...
for a moment i thought those were bricks XD
the iris needs blurring, so it doesnt look so... idk it kinda looks like a contact haha. you have a random glare in the middle of that black hole, i would either erase that or make the face more opaque.
Ok so here I added a Selective blur and very slight Gaussian blur to the iris, removed the glare and did some other minor, probably not noticable improvements...
much better, BUT i think it is not a good idea to have the text repeat itself. also i think you should use a different font. AND i think there should be a shadow on the (girls'?) face where the stuff from the right side is, like a drop shadow.
I would blur the edges of the "dark" into the face, instead of the outline.
Well it was supposed to have a slight comic/cartoon like style in it, but i will try what you suggested
Allright, new version:
i dont like that. looks too realistic. How about adding a layer mask to the dark, and make it fade into the face (black-transparent gradient, left to right.)
without the outline it just looks like a shadow on his face.
What happened to the wording on his face? I liked that part, but think it should cover that entire side - does that make sense?
Love the green eye!!
here is my version, took me longer than i expected. I wanted to get the cartoon look back that you were originally going for. Tell me what you think!
I like the way you did the outline alot more than on my original one, but i think the purple is too saturated and I don' t like the stuff around the eye though. Any chance you could upload the XCF of yours?
sure, gimme a minute! 8)
and for the "extra" pic
don't tell david!
I saw that! :!: You Know Better VT!
alright.I ll rerupload! sry *goes to stand in the corner, facing the wall*
Enjoy (the family friendly version):
;D thats better
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